Self-Evaluation
What is the thesis for your paper? Moving to Smithville was a good thing even though i didn't want to at the time
List the main points you make in your paper. Made Lifelong Friends, Moved into a nicer and bigger house, gained self-esteem and courage.
What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation? Putting more detail into the paper.
What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper? The grammer mistakes.
How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting? I wrote at the key-board and i had only one rough draft then i made a final draft from that.
What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on? I think i should of made an outline and then wrote from that, with alot of detail
What are most pleased with about this paper? I think in the end it turned out good, and i had alot more detail than i did in the rough draft and i think i made everything flow better also.
Hi Savanna,
ReplyDeleteOutlines can actually make a world of a difference especially in your case when you wrote about a specific event. Sometimes, it can be difficult to attribute why something is so significant and at the same time, providing support for it.
MS. C